smooth
pain is more deep than imagination
more recommended than murder
more bodiless than space
more real than change
it is most red and bottomless
and less unfolding
than a sheet of paper
is flat
pain is less calling than sand paper
less minute-less than lasting
less brusing than clocks
less showing than blue
it is most inching and steady
and more ready to run
than today when the undone sky
falls dark
(written 9.13.06)
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2 comments:
i like it. it's artsy, and not too obvious. subtleness is good. good work.
hi michelle~! =D no wonder why when i tried to post a comment on your other blog, it didnt work =| lol.
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